Elsie+Locke+2011

__Monday 6 June__

Main Character:Leo, Thalia, Jason

timeline : leo goes to school/leo gets in a fight with jason/leo has to go to the principles office with the jason/ leo sees a strange light in the principles closet

It was a ordinary day at school for leo so far it was the second block just before lunch he had just done cross country training. He had ran 5km. he went and sat down at a table to eat his lunch. Then jason came down and sat down next to him. Leo didn't no many kids he was happy some was sitting next to him. Leo and Jason started talking and got on very well.then the bell went to finish eating and they went to the play ground to play. After a while they got bored so went to the trees to play in them. There were some other kids there. They were planking. Leo and Jason thought it would be fun to try it they didn't no they went allowed to do it. leo went first he lied face down is chest on one branch and shins on another he had his arms on his side. Then a teacher came. Leo started getting in trouble. Leo got taken to the principle office. Leo was in there for hours it seemed for Jason waited out side for LeO

__Thursday 2 June__

Main Character:Leo, Thalia, Jason

timeline : leo goes to school/leo gets in a fight with jason/leo has to go to the principles office with the jason/ leo sees a strange light in the principles closet

it was a ordinary day at school for leo so far it was the second block just before lunch he had just done cross country training. He had ran 5km. he went and sat down at a table to eat his lunch. then jason came down and sat down next to him. Leo didn't no many kids he was happy some was sitting next to him. Leo and jason started talking and got on very well.then the bell went to finish eating and they went to the play ground to play. after a while they got bored so went to the trees to play in them. there were some other kids there. they were planking. leo and jason thought it would be fun to try it they didn't no they went allowed to do it. leo went first he lied face down is chest on one branch and shins on another he had his arms on his side.then

__Monday 30 May__

Main Character:Leo, Thalia, Jason

timeline : leo goes to school/leo gets in a fight with jason/leo has to go to the principles office with the jason/ leo sees a strange light in the principles closet

it was a ordinary day at school for leo so far it was the second block just before lunch he had just done cross country training. He had ran 5km. he went and sat down at a table to eat his lunch. then jason came down and sat down next to him. Leo didn't no many kids he was happy some was sitting next to him. Leo and jason started talking and got on very well.then the bell went to finish eating and they went to the play ground to play. after a while they got bored so went to the trees to play in them. there were some other kids there. they were planking. leo and jason thought it would be fun to try it they didn't no they went allowed to do it. leo went first he lied face down is chest on one branch and shins on another he had his arms on his side.then

__Friday 28 May__

Main Character:Leo, Thalia, Jason

timeline : leo goes to school/leo gets in a fight with jason/leo has to go to the principles office with the jason/ leo sees a strange light in the principles closet

it was a ordinary day at school for leo so far it was the second block just before lunch he had just done cross country training. He had ran 5km. he went and sat down at a table to eat his lunch. then jason came down and sat down next to him. Leo didn't no many kids he was happy some was sitting next to him.

__Monday 23 May 2011__

Main Character:Leo, Thalia, Jason

timeline : leo goes to school/leo gets in a fight with jason/leo has to go to the principles office with the jason/ leo sees a strange light in the principles closet

it was a ordinary day at school for leo so far it was the second block just before lunch he had just done cross country training. He had ran 5km. he went and sat down

__Wednesday 18 May__

Main Character:Leo, Thalia, Jason

timeline : leo goes to school/leo gets in a fight with jason/leo has to go to the principles office with the jason/ leo sees a strange light in the principles closet

it was a ordinary day at school for leo so far it was the second block just before lunch he had just done cross country training.

(Kirk) I Think that you have made a good start to your story but you forgot your capital letters.