T1+Persuade

L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

__Monday 14 March 2011__ ====Extended Morning Tea ====

==== Dear Mr Diver ====

==== Last week we had a extend morning tea. I believe that if we have more extended morning teas that would keep people being good and out of trouble. Did you like extended morning teas when your were a boy?. It gives you more sociole time and fitness levels will increase ====

==== One reason is you would get more time to chat with your staff and have time to play students. you would be able to find the bad students in each class from the teachers and find out the bad teachers from the students. ====


==== Our fitness level also would increase as students would be out running around and playing. We would also get higher beep test and 12 minute run scores and would then be higher than the other school in fitness. so then we would do better in the aims and other events. ====

==== The teachers would mark more work so then we can start work sooner. which means we would have more time to do numeracy, reading and writing. then the students would achieve the national standed ====

==== In concluseoin we should have extend ﻿ ed morning’s every friday as the above would happen ====

__thursday 9 June__
====<span style="background-color: #ffffff; font-size: 120%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px;">I think nuclear power is a good idea. some people think wind power andsolar power are good ideas but wind power takes up alot of room and if there is no wind it wont work and solar power needs alot of maintenance and it needs sun rays to generate power and it is expensive. nuclear power dose not make any green house gasses or fossil fuels which are bad for your health. do you want lung cancer or your children to get it? ====

====<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-size: 120%; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The reason people don't wasn’t nuclear power is cause of meltdowns. there have only been 3 major meltdowns. the first one was Chernobyl which was a first generation reactor and the meltdown was due to untrained technicians performing a dangerous ill-advised test. They had a small crew of which many were untrained coal miners. Many of the technicians working there objected to the test which involved shutting down the water pump. The 2nd was Three Mile Island which was a second generation reactor. A broken valve caused a coolant leak into an area designed for that purpose. A long chain of errors and misunderstandings led to a partial meltdown and the shutdown of the reactor. Despite the a long line of errors and misunderstandings the reactor shut down exactly how it was designed to do. No radiation leaked out into the environment and 0% increase in cancer was predicted to people living in the area. The safety systems worked and Three Mile Island continues to operate safely today. It was the first and only significant nuclear accident in American history. the third was Japan, a reactor shutdown after the 2011 Sendai earthquake and tsunami; failure of emergency cooling caused an explosion ====

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<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-size: 120%; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Nuclear power is a viable alternative to carbon emitting power plants and more people are harmed by fossil fuel burning plants.50,000-100,000 Americans die each year from lung cancer caused by particulate air pollution the biggest cause of which is coal-burning power plants in the midwest and east. Even taking the maximum predicted death toll from Chernobyl, America would need a Chernobyl-sized accident every three weeks to make nuclear power as deadly as coal and oil already is. =====

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<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-size: 120%; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">If New Zealand was to have solar power we would have less money to spend on rebuilding Christchurch, as solar power is a expensive option and it is hard to find the crystals that are in solar panels. solar panels also don't work if it is dark. Wind Power needs the serration land to build the Wind Farm on and needs tones of room for it. they are also expensive and don't work. =====

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Helvetica,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 120%; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> So do you want to live in a New Zealand where you are more likely to get lung cancer or where you could have no power at a sudden point in or a place where you are less likely to lung cancer and to have cheap and power that won’t cut out at a random time. think about our future, New Zealands future

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